I'll go top-down.I like the concept of the top pic with the similar backpacks, both wearing jeans, and both with red in the sneakers...and red tops. I feel there is too much space to make a stronger impact, however.2--headband. I feel similar about this as the first shot. Interesting idea but too loose with the pole and leaves distracting, even if they are blurrier. Get in closer to the detail.3--The looseness on the skateboarder works better than on the earlier pics. Nice lead space. I'm a little curious how panning would have worked here, but it stands out.4-yawn is interesting but also far away so loses some impact. Needed big telephoto here.5-red on steps is cool, nice mood, moment6-smoking is bad but I like how you are close (for picture, not lungs)7--too bad red car is there. I'd like it better with van alone.8--truck, like how it feels like you are about to get hit
So, you're glad I'm about to get hit by a truck? Thanks.
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