Jill,As I said in class, you have some very interesting shots mixed with some that I don't think you are probably happy with. What I'd like to see is more consistency. The shot where we look into the glass is very cool. The beer cooler, kegs, employees only sign, and mustard could all be stronger.We don't see much of the interior even though we see the exterior. Some interesting interior shots would have given us more of a vibe of the place. How about a little more of the place's personality? I'm still not sure what the essence of the place is.
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