Jeremy,You had some nice photos in here. Good croppings.Starting with a blurry photo is not a good idea unless they are in motion and you are going for an effect.The narrative flow lacked some logic. As we asked in class, are they playing two games? Yes, so clarify it in your captions. The flow needs clarification by your captions.Fairly consistent work as a whole, although I don't see any that really standout on their own as a portfolio shot.Since you ended with a shot at a bar, I'd like to see the start with these players as regular guys because that is what they are.
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